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Ring-a-round the Rosie....



The sound of a little girl, singing in a whispered tone. Many voices flooded your mind at once, everything was in a blur. All you saw was faded figures, color blending into human-shapes. You stumbled, the last thing you saw was a monochrome picture of you and...and...damn it! Who was that other guy? Your brain was scattered, you felt someone tap your shoulder...a little girl,"Are you lost?'' she asked. You stared, soon everything started to come in one piece, before you could answer, she giggled.

"Heh....ha...HAHAHAHAHA" you begun to back away, her eyes begun to melt into a blackish fluid, her teeth fell along with it. Her voice became distorted,"I...KNoW...whO..yOU..ArE..(NaME)...HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA...."

You felt like everything was being corrupted, your moind went blank,"WhY...dID....YoU...FoRGet...uS...?" A voice screeched, almost like a crow's call. A soft jingle of a carnival melody was heard,  slowly it became distorted, backwards, and off-key. The sound made your ears want to bleed, another girls' giggle was heard, you felt a squeeze on your hand."Come....th...e." The voice, quiet yet audible. Having no where to go and against your will, she pulled you along, far away from the place. Color started fade, yet everything became more clearer and less blurry.

You glanced at the girl, who was practically dragging you, hopefully, safety. She didn't say anything, only held a small neutral smile on her face. Her hair shoned white, guessing, she was blond. Had a small braids on each side of her head, long enough to touch her shoulders, her dress,guessing as well, must've been a pale blue with some white. She had a small, golden medal around her neck,"Penmanship" it read.  It looked a bit shiny, yet dull. Her clothing, you noticed, looked faded and a bit wrinkled as if still a bit damp. Some of her hair as well, had some flyaways. The ribbons holding the braids, looked as if the were to fall apart and let the hair loose.

Suddenly we stopped.



...Pocket full of Posies..



"Were here.." she said in her soft voice,  you glanced around. You were by some dock, were people seemed to go fishing,...why are we here? you asked yourself. She let go of your hand, she started to walk on the wooded dock, nearby the edge she droned to herself.
"Mother never did like me..not one bit. And once I earned this Penmanship Medal, she became enraged. But Father was so proud of me, he gave me a basket-of-hugs for a basket-of-kisses, he gave me some new shoes too." She clicked her shoes together and continued,"What did I do was so wrong, Mother? What made you mad and killed an innocent child and a young gardener? What did they do that was so wrong as well?" You sat there, no answer,"Perhaps, may be Father was gone a lot? Or did you think leaving you with a child drove you mad? Why did you try to frame an eight-year-old for the crimes you commited?" she sniffed.

"Why did you try to kill me and yourself?" she sobbed. You looked down at the ground, you felt a small tear form in your left eye.

"WHY MOTHER, WHY?" she screamed, you looked up, feeling a familiar feeling rose in you.

She turned her head, glaring in your direction. She stormed her way towards you, you wanted to run, but something told you to stay. A few inches away, you saw her face more clearly. She had a small chubby face, perfectly round with some pre-structure. You noticed something, her face was swollen a bit, and her lips looked dark yet light. It hit you suddenly.

This girl drowned.

She had some tear stains, her eyes looked empty with some hidden anger. She reacher to the loose string around her neck, she untied it; handing you the medal. You stared in disbelief, she skipped away, hearing faint clicks of her shoes as she skipped towards the end of the dock. She jumped in the dark waters. Out of instinct, you dropped the medal and headed at the end of the dock. You looked to see if you had any sight of the girl, no luck. As much as you wanted to save that girl, you didn't know what was in the dark waters.

You heard a soft voice sing.

Ashes...Ashes...


Who's Singing that..?

ASHES...ASHES


You turned around, to see six children holding their hands together sing in unison, three boys and three girls. All of them looked horrorific, they slowly came closely ans still sung the song. Everything felt extremely hot everything seemed to be on fire, you looked around and back at the children, two of them held baskets. Closer they got and closer you were to the edge, you slipped anf fell backwards to the darkness of the ocean. You heard a faint line sung in a whispered tone.



...And (Name) falls down...
Warning: Not much Romance in this one. Sorry if it's short and no interaction with LJ but we will get there soon enough.


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:iconjeffythekiller123:
Jeffythekiller123 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014
Thats amazingly creepy...
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blue730 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
JACK!!!! Y U MESSING WITH ME LIKE THIS?!?! DX
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iNSaNiTY-I-hAs-IT Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
amazingly creepy and horrifying ..........................
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I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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elephantgirl202 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014
I FLIPPING LOVE THIS!!! ya... I'm really creepy... OuO
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KisameFanFromHell Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013
*Drops in and flips over in the water and swims for the surface and shaking out my hair I giggle* Hay That wasnt nice! Im still in my chlothes. *chuckles*
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Ciel-phantomhive3 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013
Jack, why you toy with me?!
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SketchyShade Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Are you making more? This is a very nice fan fiction.
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blackstar112 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013
when is the next one?
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MissPyroNeko Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconmoarplz: MOAR!!!!!
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laughingjack720 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013
NOOO! PLEASE WRITE MOREEEE!! IM DYIN OVAH HEAR!!!!!
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